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UN_LEASHED_DRAGON
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2023 6:26 pm� �Post subject: Reply with quote

i like it but ur poems r always sad and kinda dark O__O

i hope after what happend today u will write about rainbows and bunnys ^__^
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2023 6:37 pm� �Post subject: Reply with quote

loool... i'll have to think about it, rainbows and bunnies ....loool maybe not bunnies, but wbo knows.. ^_^
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 28, 2023 3:50 am� �Post subject: Reply with quote

maybe b/c it is easier to write about dark adn sad things ...
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 28, 2023 6:06 am� �Post subject: Reply with quote

its her outlet, and a way to express whats hidden inside her. and perhaps she writes dark poems a lot cuz the darkness is over flowing inside her... not neccessarily being easier.........

but keep writing these poems, and one day you will look back at them and see how much things have or havent changed.

I did that with my drawings...~.~
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 28, 2023 12:11 pm� �Post subject: Reply with quote

thanks, and yes i write what i feel, and it helps me think that way i dont yell at any one or get anry which i have doing ^_^... but who know's i might write about rainbow's but not bunnies, cant think of anything to put bunnies in...
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 28, 2023 3:39 pm� �Post subject: Reply with quote

@chunkat: I do that too ...when I draw ..next morning I look back at it, I am like 'OMG! THAT'S SO BAD!!' ><

@Fagel:I think its very cool of you to write poems. A reflection of yourself. ^^

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 05, 2023 2:49 pm� �Post subject: Reply with quote

am not saying that i dont like them or something its just that i want her to

Cheer up a lil, and i understand that she writes her feeling and stuff
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 07, 2024 9:49 am� �Post subject: Reply with quote

Memories of yesterday�

Memories of yesterday
When the sun shined bright
And no worries in the mind of a child
Playing so freely
Never fearing pain of defeat
Rainbows and rain falls
Looked the same to me
Skipping rope, and hide and seek
Games I wish would stay with me
Snakes and ladders
And monopoly
Family time that I waited for so eagerly

Now I�m older
Playing no longer
Dancing for ever
Finding my way through life�s endless breeze
Pain comes easily
Walking each day more carefully
Worrying about choices
Hunting down dreams
Never knew life would end up so terribly

Looking back at yesterday
No worries of what life would bring
If I only knew then how hard life would be
Fighting for freedom
Running form demons
That tries to control me
Heart breaks and mind aches
Things I never knew would be part of me

Candy dreams
Rainbow streams
Wish they could have stayed
My memories of yesterday
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 10, 2024 1:51 am� �Post subject: Reply with quote

wow ...that was . ..DEEP!!

since you say you write your feelings, I am assuming that this is another one.

you could still have childish fun ...just make time for them.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 11, 2024 12:27 am� �Post subject: Reply with quote

u know i never read poems, but i have to say this one is touching.
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 14, 2024 11:21 am� �Post subject: Reply with quote

thanks guys..

that was deep? *you havent read the one's I dont post, now there deep ^_^*
I do have fun, its just that I feel guilty when I do cos then I think of all the other things I had to do and didnt, and .... and.... well *take's deep breath* I'll try and write more pome's, well I do have more that I wrote but everyone will think me weared if you guys read them ...

D you find my poem touching O_o... you should read more poems XD cos thats nothing...

any way more coming soon.. ^_^
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 14, 2024 2:40 pm� �Post subject: Reply with quote

woow ... If only I can write a poem
i love it

Honestly I dont know how to write I want to.. but cannot ><
I end up writting funny stuff Razz


Nice work FA ^__^
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 14, 2024 2:46 pm� �Post subject: Reply with quote

thanks FoA.. and its not that hard to write a poem, really, you can start by writing what you feel, and then try and make it ryam a little, and walah you have a poem... ^_^ try it, I'll help if you like..
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