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UN_LEASHED_DRAGON Legendary Sannin

Joined: 02 Apr 2024 Posts: 1971 Location: In the city of blinding lights
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Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2023 6:26 pm�� �Post subject: |
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i like it but ur poems r always sad and kinda dark O__O
i hope after what happend today u will write about rainbows and bunnys ^__^ _________________
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FALLEN_ANGEL ANBU (S-rank mission)


Joined: 03 Jul 2024 Posts: 1602 Location: lost in darkness
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Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2023 6:37 pm�� �Post subject: |
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loool... i'll have to think about it, rainbows and bunnies ....loool maybe not bunnies, but wbo knows.. ^_^ _________________
Memories of you keep me alive, lost in things that make me cry. |
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cerin Hunter-nin (A-rank mission)

Joined: 04 Feb 2024 Posts: 1227 Location: someplace you wouldn't care
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Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2023 3:50 am�� �Post subject: |
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maybe b/c it is easier to write about dark adn sad things ... _________________
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Chunkat^^ Hidden-nin

Joined: 02 Oct 2024 Posts: 729 Location: I ride Kangaroos to work ~.~;
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Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2023 6:06 am�� �Post subject: |
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its her outlet, and a way to express whats hidden inside her. and perhaps she writes dark poems a lot cuz the darkness is over flowing inside her... not neccessarily being easier.........
but keep writing these poems, and one day you will look back at them and see how much things have or havent changed.
I did that with my drawings...~.~ _________________
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FALLEN_ANGEL ANBU (S-rank mission)


Joined: 03 Jul 2024 Posts: 1602 Location: lost in darkness
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Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2023 12:11 pm�� �Post subject: |
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thanks, and yes i write what i feel, and it helps me think that way i dont yell at any one or get anry which i have doing ^_^... but who know's i might write about rainbow's but not bunnies, cant think of anything to put bunnies in... _________________
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cerin Hunter-nin (A-rank mission)

Joined: 04 Feb 2024 Posts: 1227 Location: someplace you wouldn't care
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Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2023 3:39 pm�� �Post subject: |
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@chunkat: I do that too ...when I draw ..next morning I look back at it, I am like 'OMG! THAT'S SO BAD!!' ><
@Fagel:I think its very cool of you to write poems. A reflection of yourself. ^^ _________________
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UN_LEASHED_DRAGON Legendary Sannin

Joined: 02 Apr 2024 Posts: 1971 Location: In the city of blinding lights
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2023 2:49 pm�� �Post subject: |
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am not saying that i dont like them or something its just that i want her to
Cheer up a lil, and i understand that she writes her feeling and stuff _________________
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FALLEN_ANGEL ANBU (S-rank mission)


Joined: 03 Jul 2024 Posts: 1602 Location: lost in darkness
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2024 9:49 am�� �Post subject: |
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Memories of yesterday�
Memories of yesterday
When the sun shined bright
And no worries in the mind of a child
Playing so freely
Never fearing pain of defeat
Rainbows and rain falls
Looked the same to me
Skipping rope, and hide and seek
Games I wish would stay with me
Snakes and ladders
And monopoly
Family time that I waited for so eagerly
Now I�m older
Playing no longer
Dancing for ever
Finding my way through life�s endless breeze
Pain comes easily
Walking each day more carefully
Worrying about choices
Hunting down dreams
Never knew life would end up so terribly
Looking back at yesterday
No worries of what life would bring
If I only knew then how hard life would be
Fighting for freedom
Running form demons
That tries to control me
Heart breaks and mind aches
Things I never knew would be part of me
Candy dreams
Rainbow streams
Wish they could have stayed
My memories of yesterday _________________
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cerin Hunter-nin (A-rank mission)

Joined: 04 Feb 2024 Posts: 1227 Location: someplace you wouldn't care
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2024 1:51 am�� �Post subject: |
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wow ...that was . ..DEEP!!
since you say you write your feelings, I am assuming that this is another one.
you could still have childish fun ...just make time for them. _________________
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Aquarius Special Jounin (S-rank mission)


Joined: 13 Feb 2024 Posts: 2004 Location: In the sky...Try and catch me if u can...
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2024 12:27 am�� �Post subject: |
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u know i never read poems, but i have to say this one is touching. _________________
i'll wait for u until the heaven falls
i'll wait for you until the end of worlds
i'll wait for you until i no longer breath
i know that it's not impossible
i'll wait for you until you finish your fight
i'll wait for you until the timing is right
i'll wait for you until you knock on my door. |
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FALLEN_ANGEL ANBU (S-rank mission)


Joined: 03 Jul 2024 Posts: 1602 Location: lost in darkness
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Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2024 11:21 am�� �Post subject: |
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thanks guys..
that was deep? *you havent read the one's I dont post, now there deep ^_^*
I do have fun, its just that I feel guilty when I do cos then I think of all the other things I had to do and didnt, and .... and.... well *take's deep breath* I'll try and write more pome's, well I do have more that I wrote but everyone will think me weared if you guys read them ...
D you find my poem touching O_o... you should read more poems XD cos thats nothing...
any way more coming soon.. ^_^ _________________
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Fairy of Arabia Tensai nin (B-rank mission)


Joined: 26 Jan 2024 Posts: 239 Location: Shinigami World
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Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2024 2:40 pm�� �Post subject: |
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woow ... If only I can write a poem
i love it
Honestly I dont know how to write I want to.. but cannot ><
I end up writting funny stuff
Nice work FA ^__^ _________________
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FALLEN_ANGEL ANBU (S-rank mission)


Joined: 03 Jul 2024 Posts: 1602 Location: lost in darkness
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Posted: Wed Feb 14, 2024 2:46 pm�� �Post subject: |
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thanks FoA.. and its not that hard to write a poem, really, you can start by writing what you feel, and then try and make it ryam a little, and walah you have a poem... ^_^ try it, I'll help if you like.. _________________
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